When Destiny Moves along Our Path (Part 3)
...Adam left quickly after our overwhelming conversation, when night came i went for a walk and found Adam walking at the sidewalk, but he was with someone, so i took a closer look and saw Jenny. I cannot believe Adam already found Jen in such a short time, so i just smiled and turned away but i suddenly heard a shriek from behind and saw them being violated by a few masked men, I saw Adam trying to fight off the masked men then i suddenly heard a loud "bang", it took me a few seconds to realize what had happened, I shouted "Adam!!" and quickly ran to help them, but before i got there the men already ran and I just saw Jenny crying and then tears started to fall down my face and shouted for help but no one was there so i kept on shouting until a car stopped behind us and helped us, the time we arrived at the hospital I was completely covered with blood and Adam was sent to the Emergency Room and I sat at the waiting room and found Jenny crying, so I sat beside her and said "Everything is gonna be fine, lets have faith", and she said "yeah i guess you're right, a person who has hope has everything huh". I just smiled again and said "yeah i guess that's one way to put it".
After a few hours, I fell asleep and then a doctor woke me up and said "Sir your friend has severe wounds but we did what we can, and thank God he's okay". i smiled and said " Oh God thank you so much doctor." I tried to wake Jenny up but she's sleeping soundly so i just whispered "he's okay". The moment i said that ,she woke up and then she ran to the room so I followed her, when I got there i saw Jenny kneeling to Adam's bed crying and the doctor said to me "I forgot to tell you, your friend suffered a very serious injury and resulted into a very complex mental state..if you want me to put it in a less complicated term, he's in a coma , a bullet hit a nerve and accidentally altered the function of another nerve...we're very sorry..I promise you we'll take good care of your friend".
I walked slowly to Jenny and put my hand around her and said "Lets have faith, maybe God really is testing the love you guys have...maybe someday his love will find its way to you, then you'll realize that love is just another way of showing something that people normally cannot express".......
After a few hours, I fell asleep and then a doctor woke me up and said "Sir your friend has severe wounds but we did what we can, and thank God he's okay". i smiled and said " Oh God thank you so much doctor." I tried to wake Jenny up but she's sleeping soundly so i just whispered "he's okay". The moment i said that ,she woke up and then she ran to the room so I followed her, when I got there i saw Jenny kneeling to Adam's bed crying and the doctor said to me "I forgot to tell you, your friend suffered a very serious injury and resulted into a very complex mental state..if you want me to put it in a less complicated term, he's in a coma , a bullet hit a nerve and accidentally altered the function of another nerve...we're very sorry..I promise you we'll take good care of your friend".
I walked slowly to Jenny and put my hand around her and said "Lets have faith, maybe God really is testing the love you guys have...maybe someday his love will find its way to you, then you'll realize that love is just another way of showing something that people normally cannot express".......
posted by Garri at 4:17 PM
10 Comments:
awwwwwwww... ang sad naman. Wahahahaaa. What can i say? I'm speechless. so damn speechless. Lolx. That's really a nice story. I can't wait sa next episode!!!! wag baman sana mamatay si aDam!! wahahaaa..
onga pizza! wag mo muna patayin character ni adam! ahehe... ang lungkot... pero interesting... can't wait for the next episode pizza!!! haha...
nice and interesting story ^_^ Err. Kinda predicting though but still good ^_____^ Wala bang character na biglang lalabas para magseduce dun sa narrator? I feel like the narrator is just there to tell quotes to adam and jen :P Para masaya gawin mong character dun yung narrator sa lovestory nila adam and jen XDXDXD
nice nice tho iz so dramatic en da lines, lol...ang deep =P
kip up da gud work
oh my gossshhh!!!! ang galing!!!! kakaiyak!! da best!! gawa ka ng book mo best ni best! =P *applause*
aaww.. ang galing naman ni neighbour ko.. ^__________^ hanep.. ang lufet ng story line.. =D ang dideep ng words.. di ka ba nauubusan? ahaha.. payce tayo neighbour... ^____________^ pero.. sana di mamamatay c Adam... astig pa naman ung character nya... parang a walk to remember.. *laughs* pero.. different lng ung story line.. ^______________^ astig talaga nieghbour..
kip it up ^_____________^
sorta interesting kung san papunta ung story. super dramatic sa una pa lng. galing ah. may potential, thumbs up ako! ;D hehe. keep it up!
soooooooowwwww dramatic......sorta bitin nga lng....hehe:P but overall it is a really gud story....nxt tym mke it long nman....ung my happee ending....lol:P gling mo garri! thumbs up!
and oh yea.......i almost 4got.....sna gnwa mo nlng alvin ung guy pra luvstory ni bayaw en jen.....nyahahaha:P
so kelan mo gagawin un part 4? nagpromise ka ah! sobrang biten kse eh. it's such a nice story. mahilig pa nman ao sa mga gnyan. but don't kill any character yet ah?! sobrang sad nman pag nagkaganon! sa monday nlan lunch mate! yay! :)
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